After we finished our preliminary task we presented our own individual pieces to the class and recieved feedback so that we could act on it and produce better quality media for our next main task. The feedback consisted of good points and bad which could be seen as improvements to be made for the main task. The good feedback was that there was a wide range of shots featured in the short clip, this consisted of close ups, medium shots, wide angled shots and master shots. Also there was a point made about good use of appropriate lighting, so there was a contrast from dark to light when one of the characters opens the blinds to reveal light into the room. Also the use of sound (male screaming) at the beginning was another good point made. However there were also some areas which needed improvements, there was no/faulty sound for the rest of the clip and the shots did not flow very smoothly, for this reason my improvements are to ensure that there is sound and produce continuity in editing my work so that it doesn't look like the shots are just fitted together but that they flow in a continuous sequence.
Below is my edited version of the film 'Rope':
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